Research and Planning: White Text Slogan Dilemma

After getting the audience feedback, I was happy with how they said white text looks best. However after adding all the Steel tongs and added features I feel it looked too bright and loud so to compromise I added in a gray colour and made the words "Past" and "Future" white to stand out. I also made the "Bring" and  "Disappears" text a red colour to make them words stand out as well.